The May bank holiday—when London quiets and the countryside stirs to life. Emily finished packing the last of the groceries into the boot, while Thomas fussed with the sat-nav, double-checking the route.
“Certain we haven’t forgotten anything?” he asked for the third time, casting a final glance at their flat.
Emily rolled her eyes. “We’ve got everything. Straighteners, chargers, books—I checked twice.”
“What about Mum? Who’s feeding Whiskers?”
At the mention of her mother-in-law, Emily stiffened. The subject of Margaret always tightened her chest. Charming in public, but among family, she transformed into a relentless critic. Advice, corrections, disapproving sighs—as if their home were hers to command.
“I texted her everything,” Emily said briskly. “Food’s in the left cupboard, litter tray daily, plants on schedule.”
“Maybe just call her?” Thomas suggested gently.
“Why? She’ll read it.”
Then it struck her—the security camera. They’d installed it after a spate of burglaries in the area—small, discreet, perched on the bookshelf among trinkets, angled over the lounge.
“Wait—” She brightened. “I forgot to check if the camera’s on. One sec!”
She darted back inside. The tiny device blinked green; the app streamed a crisp image, sound clear.
“Sorted!” she announced, returning. “Let’s go!”
Thomas didn’t pry. Three years of marriage had taught him when to leave his wife’s quirks be.
Margaret arrived the next day. She’d had a key for years—”just in case,” as Thomas put it. Emily had made her disdain for this “spare access” perfectly clear.
“Here, Whiskers! Granny’s here!” Margaret cooed as she stepped inside.
The black cat slinked from the bedroom, stretched, and padded to the kitchen, nudging his empty bowl.
“Patience, love,” Margaret murmured, fetching the kibble.
She scanned the flat and frowned. Unwashed mugs, crumpled cushions, a newspaper sprawled on the floor.
“What sort of housekeeping is this…” she muttered, rolling up her sleeves.
She switched on the radio—an old tune from her youth—and tidied with military precision. Half an hour later, the kitchen gleamed, cushions plumped, newspaper neatly folded.
Settling on the sofa, she dialled her friend Linda.
“Hello, love? It’s me. Guess where I am? Thomas and Emily’s—they’ve whisked off to the Cotswolds, left me with the cat and plants.”
Her voice dropped. “Trust? Hardly. More like necessity. Emily left another instruction list! As if I’ve never cared for an animal. Raised three children, yet she treats me like a novice…”
Meanwhile, on the cottage patio, Emily watched the scene unfold on her phone. Every word rang clear.
“Thomas! Come here!” she called—he was chopping firewood for dinner.
“What’s wrong?” he asked, wiping his hands.
“Listen to what your mother’s saying about us!”
On screen, Margaret continued: “Sometimes I feel like a ghost in their lives. Thomas tries, but that Emily… Marches to her own drum. My advice might as well be wind.”
She gestured at the curtains. “Take these! I said heavier fabric to stop the sun bleaching the walls. But no—‘We want it light.’ Now look—one side’s already faded!”
Thomas stared between the phone and his wife.
“Emily, is that a hidden camera? You’ve been spying on my mum?”
She blinked. “On our flat! For security! And look how it’s paid off. Now we know what she really thinks.”
On screen, Margaret prattled on: “And her cooking! Linda, last week she served quinoa with avocado. What even is that? Why not a proper roast for guests? Thomas grew up on my shepherd’s pie, now he’s eating twigs!”
With that, she plucked a photo frame from the shelf—Thomas as a boy.
“Oh, my Tommy’s changed since he married…” She sighed. “Used to visit every Sunday. Now I’m lucky if it’s once a month. Always ‘Emily this, Emily that’—”
She cut herself off, gently replacing the frame.
“Right, Linda, I’m getting sentimental. Must be my age. You remember how it was—being the mother-in-law. Life moves on… I’ll ring later.”
Thomas set the phone down, glaring.
“Em, this is too far. Recording Mum without her knowing? It’s an invasion.”
“Me?” she hissed. “Her rifling through our home, rearranging things, nitpicking—that’s fine?”
“But secretly filming her—”
“She’s in our flat! Our rules!” Emily’s voice rose. “Just watch!”
She replayed the feed. Margaret stood in the kitchen, opening cupboards, sniffing a spice jar.
“What’s this? No label, no price. Probably expensive. This is where their money goes…”
Then she pulled a parcel from her bag.
“Let them eat proper food for once. My Tommy’s too thin.”
Emily scoffed. “Hear that? Even our spices get judged. And she’s stuffed her shepherd’s pie in our fridge!”
Thomas pinched the bridge of his nose. “She’s just caring in her way…”
“She thinks I’m a terrible wife and worse homemaker!” Emily’s voice wavered. “To her, I’ll never be good enough for her ‘golden boy.’”
On screen, Margaret entered their bedroom, smoothing the duvet.
“Oh my God—she’s in our room!” Emily gasped.
“Just making the bed,” Thomas sighed.
“And now—! She’s opening my wardrobe! Thomas, she’s touching my clothes!”
Indeed, Margaret’s fingers brushed the hangers, lingering on one—a blue dress she’d helped pick for their engagement party.
“Here you are,” she whispered, pressing it to her chest. “I remember Tommy’s face: ‘Mum, it’s her colour!’ And she’s never worn it…”
She hung it prominently, then called Linda again.
“Linda… maybe I do expect too much. Their home’s clean, cosy. Emily tries. Not my way, but she tries… Maybe I should bite my tongue more.”
Pause.
“Then again—I’ll still make my shepherd’s pie. Can’t fool a mother’s instinct. My boy’s too thin.”
Thomas and Emily exchanged glances. This twist was unexpected.
“Maybe… she’s more perceptive than you thought,” he said softly.
“And I’m no better,” Emily admitted. “Installing cameras, spying… Like a child.”
Thomas pulled her close. “What now?”
She gazed at the sunset.
“We talk. All three of us. Honestly. No lists. No cameras.”
Two days passed. Emily barely checked the app. Each time her hand hovered over the phone, she saw it again—Margaret confiding in Linda about her loneliness, her doubts.
On the third evening, curiosity won. “Just a quick check,” she lied to herself, tapping the feed.
Empty lounge. Bubbling sounds from the kitchen. Then Margaret appeared, pot in hand.
“There, Whiskers,” she told the cat. “We’ll surprise them. They’ll return tired, hungry—and bam! Roast dinner! Think Emily will like that?”
Whiskers meowed.
“None for you,” she scratched his ears. “But Linda and I were talking… Maybe I am too hard on Emily. At her age, I knew nothing either.”
Emily’s chest tightened. Like overhearing a private confession.
Then Margaret’s phone rang.
“Hello, Tommy! No, no—all’s well. Whiskers is fed, plants watered, just as Emily asked.”
Pause. Her face fell.
“Camera? What camera? On the bookshelf? You—you filmed me?”
Emily froze. Her pulse hammered.
Margaret turned slowly, eyes locking onto the lens—as if sensing the gaze upon her.
“So Emily’s been… watching me?” Her voice was frail. “She heard everything? All my chats with Linda?”
Another pause. Her expression hardened—not with anger, but something raw and wounded.
“I see. Thanks for the warning. No, I’m not cross. Of course. Goodbye, Tommy.”
She hung up, sitting statue-still, grappling with the betrayal. Then she stood, marched to the camera, and spoke directly into it:
“Well, Emily… Hope you enjoyed the show. Learn anything new?”
Her voice quivered—not with rage, but humiliation.
“I can understand many things. But this? This is low.”
Without another word, she grabbed her coat and left.
Emily sat stunned. Her phone buzzed—a text from Thomas: “Sorry. She asked outright why I’d call if you’d left instructions. Had to tell her.”
“Damn it!” Emily hissed, calling him.
“At the till. WhatMargaret returned the next day, her pride stung but her heart still yearning to bridge the gap, and as she hesitantly handed Emily a well-worn family recipe book—its pages filled with decades of love and tradition—they both knew, without a word, that forgiveness had begun to weave its quiet magic between them.
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